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I kiss you softly,
Savoring your taste.
I scrape my teeth
Down your neck,
But you don't even moan.
I brush your hair away
And kiss you on the forehead
Before pulling you close to me.
You don't respond.
You don't even blink.
You just sit there as I caress you,
I want more,
I would love more.
But you don't give back,
You can't give back.
Because there's a hole
In your chest
Where your heart
Has been ripped out.

You are dead
And I'm left loving
Your cold corpse.
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I love tormenting my OCs too much... :iconotlplz:
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wasn't expecting this to end like that. :o Beyond words.
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WhiteLucke Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't even know what to say about this it's so amazing :iconcryforeverplz::iconclapplz:
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harpyeagle45 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
very insightful. Awesome. :)
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Collateral-Damage666 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. :)
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harpyeagle45 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
your welcomes. :)
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Gamergirl654 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I...am soo...sad
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Collateral-Damage666 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
Because of the poem? :C
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Gamergirl654 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, yes, I remember days when I used to feel numb, empty, anguished, all that jazz. Its just a small reminder. But I gotta say, its a realllly good poem. Makes me want to start poetry again.
;)
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Collateral-Damage666 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you. :)
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SydneyRowe Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
thats cute
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