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Every sight of you sends me over the edge.
[I'm addicted to you.]

You're like a pill.
[That I keep swallowing.]

Constantly, you seem to draw me in.
[I hold my breath in suspense.]

But then you cast me out again.
[Cut my chest until the pain fades.]

And then we do it all over again.
[Circling in our psychotic dance.]
From Kazuo's point of view this time.

Other one like it: I Broke My Promise:I Love YouI promised myself.
[I broke my promise.]
I never thought I'd meet someone like you.
[Someone who cared for me.]
You showed me friendship.
[You taught me trust.]
You reminded me how to laugh.
[I had forgotten how.]
You gave me a shoulder to cry on.
[I finally shed those endless tears.]
When I shivered in fright, you would hold me.
[When I'm with you, I'm not as scared.]
You were always there for me no matter what.
[I've come to love you.]
<---- Izanami's POV


I kinda feel like it don't make
Like, like, like, like it don't make
Feel like it don't make s-s-sense

I'm thinkin', baby, you and I are undeniable
But I'm findin' out love's unreliable
I'm givin' all I got to make you stay
Or am I just a roadblock in your way?

'Cause you're a pretty little wind storm out on the boulevard
Somethin' like a sunset, oh, you're a shooting star
And I might drive myself insane
If those lips aren't speakin' my name

'Cause I've got some intuition and maybe I'm superstitious
But I think you're a pretty sweet pill that I'm swallowing down
To counter this addiction, you got me on a mission
Tell me, darling, can I get a break somehow?

How could I say no?

She's got a love like woe
Girl's got a love like woe
I kinda feel like it don't make sense
Because you're bringin' me in and now you're kickin' me out again

Love so strong
Then you moved on
Now I'm hung up in suspense
Because you're bringin' me in and then you're kickin' me out again

It's like a hurricane, speed train, she's a moving car
Catch her in the fast lane, oh, I gotta know
Can I keep up with her pace?
Kickin' it into gear when I see that face

You can take up all my time 'cause you're the only one
And that can make a storm cloud break, pullin' out the sun
And I can't get caught in the rain
Can I get your lips to speak my name?

'Cause I've got some intuition and maybe I'm superstitious
But I think you're a pretty sweet pill that I'm swallowing down
To counter this addiction, you got me on a mission
Tell me, darling, can I get a break somehow?

How could I say no?

She's got a love like woe
Girl's got a love like woe
I kinda feel like it don't make sense
Because you're bringin' me in and now you're kickin' me out again

Love so strong
Then you moved on
Now I'm hung up in suspense
Because you're bringin' me in and then you're kickin' me out again

'Cause we only have one life
The timing and the moment all seem so right
So would you say you're mine?
(We'll be just fine)
Would you say you're mine?
(We'll be just fine)

She's got a love like woe
Girl's got a love like woe
I kinda feel like it don't make sense
Because you're bringin' me in and now you're kickin' me out again

Love so strong
Then you moved on
Now I'm hung up in suspense
Because you're bringin' me in and then you're kickin' me out again

She's got a love like woe
Girl's got a love like woe
I kinda feel like it don't make sense
Because you're bringin' me in and now you're kickin' me out again

Love so strong
Then you moved on
Now I'm hung up in suspense
Because you're bringin' me in and then you're kickin' me out again
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telestlees Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
You're like a pill would sound better with [and I'm addicted to you]
But nice poem very lovely!
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LollipopRawr Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Student Writer
really good (:
and relateable, which is what i really love about all your poems (:
(^ i think i butchered that last word o-e)
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Collateral-Damage666 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you! :glomp:
It's relatable. :XD:
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LollipopRawr Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Student Writer
youre welcome : DDDD
and oh! i thought that was the wrong way XD
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XD
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Collateral-Damage666 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Student Writer
:XD:
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Mai-Taniyama-anime Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Writer
awesome!
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TwyceInABluMoon Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011   Writer
I love this!!
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Collateral-Damage666 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you. :D
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TwyceInABluMoon Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011   Writer
My pleasure. :la:
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midnightstorm45044 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't get over this epic style <3
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